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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3433
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;学术词汇偏少,且文中有部分拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

As we all know,honest is one of the good characters for our humunbeing.When I was young, I'd listen to my grandma told me to a good boy,especially firstly to be a honest boy .Don't go for wealth; even that fades away;To be a honest man which will take much benift in your whole life. So,why the honest is recongized as the most important character?Fristly,it can make others belive you and support you.Can you imagine you live a miserable life that everynoe doubt with you?That is terrible.What is more,when you did a business or make fortain,you will lose at last once you lac k the honest.As the old saying goes,one who laughted last laughted best. For after all, our fate is to be free. To choose competition over apathy, caring over indifference, vision over myopia, and love over hate,all are based on honest.Let us learn to be a honest man,only in this way,can we make more success in the futuer .

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