小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

my best friend named lily. she is a lovely girl,whose smile is really sweet. she is also very kind,often treat me big meals. lily and i have some same hobbies ,include playing piano,reading and surfing the internet. we often hang out together on weekend and go for pizza or stuff like that . after we graduated from school ,we keep contacting each other .