2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

可适当增加从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；请作者增加词汇丰富度，适当增加学术词汇的使用，拼写错误要努力避免。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Success is a abstract word ,it is difficult to explain . To some extent ,if you want to be a successful man ,you have to work very hard;if you want to be a successful man ,you should have dogged ambition;if you want to be a successful man, you shuld be calm and smart. Strong ambition ensures suceess.A man who has a strong feeling can achieves his further ambition.Do you agree with me ? AS for our students, we are the hope of our country;therefore,we should work hard,if we do not , we won't become a useful man to our country;if we do not,we cannot contribute to our country;if we do not,our country doesn't ungrade . To sum up,if we want to succeed,we must take actions and work hard.