作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Dear John I'm delighted to acquire your invitation,but I'm afraid to tell you that I can't appear your party.I will busy on preparing for an important test the day after tomorrow. I must pass the exam,so I really hope that you will understand me. At last,I wish you will take a wonderful time with your family on that day! your best, Li Hua