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字数:300 满分:100分
文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
In my opinion,all that doesn't mean we are not a smart consumer.We do that because we want to save more money.It's a good way for us to be a wise consumer. In my daily life,there too many things are expensive for us.We can't afford them.The prises are so high.But if I really love them.I will wait and buy them until they are in sale.I buy them not only they are cheap,but also I think they are worth for me to buy.What's more,in this way,I can save money. All in all,using the coupons,looking for group-buy deals and buying things when they are in sale are good ways for us to save more money.We are still a wise consumer.