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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33653
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

In my opinion,all that doesn't mean we are not a smart consumer.We do that because we want to save more money.It's a good way for us to be a wise consumer. In my daily life,there too many things are expensive for us.We can't afford them.The prises are so high.But if I really love them.I will wait and buy them until they are in sale.I buy them not only they are cheap,but also I think they are worth for me to buy.What's more,in this way,I can save money. All in all,using the coupons,looking for group-buy deals and buying things when they are in sale are good ways for us to save more money.We are still a wise consumer.

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