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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；熟练使用了一些长难句；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。
As we all know, there is a lot of bueatiful place in China, such as Xianggerila in Yunnan province, Guilin in Guangxi province, empireqing in Shanxi province and etc. However, in my eyes, the most place in China is my hometown Zhangjiajie. There are a lot of things support my deal. First of all, everyday when you get up you can breath the most fresh air and begin a good day with a good mood. The second, Zhangjiaje is a city surrounding by mountian and tree, you can claping mountian to keep your health and standing on the top of the mountian you can see a lot of different scence. Thirdly, you will meet a lot of people who come from different country traveled to here. To sum up, Zhangjiajie is the most bueatiful city lhad ever seen, so welcome to Zhangjiajie.
