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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。
As we all know, there is a lot of beautiful place in China, such as Xianggerila in Yunnan province, Guilin in Guangxi province, empire Qing in Shanxi province and etc. However, in my eyes, the most places in China are my hometown Zhangjiajie. There is a lot of things support my deal. First of all, every day when you get up you can breathe the most fresh air and begin a good day with a good mood. The second, Zhangjiaje is a city surrounding by mountain and tree, you can clamping mountain to keep your health and standing on the top of the mountain you can see a lot of different scène. Thirdly, you will meet a lot of people who come from different country traveled to here. To sum up, Zhangjiajie is the most beautiful city had ever seen, so welcome to Zhangjiajie.
