题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust With the improvement of economy,we are become dishonesty,we never trust people.But we need trust others,because we have to survive. On maintaining trust,we can do anything.When we need help,we should trust our friends and family.That's we can get somebody's help.If i trust you and then i look for your help,you would trust me and help me,if i'm not,you would not help me. Trust somebody is happiness,we would get happy and forget pain.