题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
With the improvement of economy,we are become dishonesty,we never trust people.But we need trust others,because we have to survive. Keep trust,we can do anything.When we need help,we should trust our friends and family.That's we can get somebody help.If I trust you and then I look for your help,you would trust me and help me,if I'm not,you would not help me. Trustment is happiness,we would get happy and forget pain.