2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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On maintaining trust With the improvement of economy,we are becomeing dishonesty，we never trust people.But we need trust others,because we have to survive. Keep trust,we can do anything.When we need help,we should trust our friends and family.That's we can get somebody help.If I trust you and then I look for your help,you would trust me and help me,if I'm not,you would not help me. Trustment is happiness,we would get happy and forget pain.