题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust With the improvement of economy,we are becoming dishonesty,we never belief some people.But we need trust others,because we have to survive. Keep trust,we can do anything.When we need help,we should trust our friends and family.That's we can get somebody help.If I trust you and then I look for your help,you would trust me and help me,if I'm not,you would not help me. Belief someone is importment,we would get happy and forget pain.