高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport Volleyball is my favorite sport.It is hardworking,but it is very good for your body! It all started when m father gave me a volley ball.I was little then,but i started to practived volley ball. Being a volley ball player is my destiny!It is a part of my dream,a part of my life. I always play volley ball with my best friend Vicky.She is not very good at it, but how cares,it is just for fun. So what is your favorite sport?