2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

简单句比重稍微偏高，文中有句子错误；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；文中拼写错误稍多，作者词汇量偏小；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段。

On maintaining trust nowdays,we can see all that people have no trust . We cann‘t alone,sowe need person to play.In life,we shoud to be do every things,so we need trust to ctrolture the things can be down .because so many person wo no have trust live to no have trust .