题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust With the improvement of economy,we become not honest,we never belief some people.Nevertheless we need trust others,because we have to survive. Keep trust,we can do anything.When we need help,we should trust our friends and family.That's we can get somebody help.If I trust you and then I look for your help,you would trust me and help me,if I'm not,you would not support me. Belief someone is very important,we would get happy and forget the pain.So we should hold trust.