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从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。
Admittedly, everyone will die oneday, no matter how cherish one's life. However, we can live a meaningful life and leave something benefit to others, although we cannot entend our life. It is known that "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it". On the one hand, some people spend their life in increasing their worth and prestige, ignoring the feeling and emotion of their famliy members or friends. It is selfish and unwise for those who only pursuit matter and neglect inner thought without leave any valuable opinions and events. On the other hand, maybe, some people choose to live a simple, happy and general life, reading an interesting book, keeping a pet, helping other to seek a correct way, or just get together with families. It always be kept in mind by others due to their kindness and hot-heart. For example, it is well known that Lei Feng, an ordinary person, is famous for his kindness until now, although he has passed away for decades. In conclusion, it is unchangeable for the length of our life, however, it can be chose for us to life a meaningful, versatile and enjoyable life.
