2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Please Leave The Phone Nowadays,as technology development, more and more people has phones. Anywhere We can see some phenomenon that people play their phone- in walking, by bus, cross road, or sleeping. They can't stand mobile phone left themselves. That is not a real life. Please far away the phone! First, phone not only conveinent but also contain rays, which would hurt our brain; Second, we are addict in phone that could break down our life, then would excessive attention to plaything saps the will; And wether you like to play phone would over relive the phone, then sometimes leave will make you sorrow. Someone think phone is sense of save, but phone would hurt your spirt and soul.