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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33610
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

In my opinion the money is a kind of resource which should be used in a correct way. We ought not to spend money on some unnecessary things. Sometimes, we may take some measures to save as more money as possible, Whereas these measures can not achieve the gole frequently. When you get some coupons you may forget to use them until they are nearly beyond the deadline, and at that time you may buy a large scale goods to make these coupons worth. When you look through the Amazon or Taobao in the internet you may are attracted by some attractive goods which look great, have a big dicount and are useless to you. You buy clothes in a sale, however, these clothes are not suitable for the season you are undergoing. So all of these measures are not practical. the only one way to save money or to be a smart consumers is that you must have a good knowledge about what you need and do not give any attention to the good looking but useless goods.

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