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As we all know,December 5th is international Voolunteers Day.Since 1985.It has a significant meanings to our humanbeings and also take much benifit to the society. On the first place,it is good for the saving liberforces to the world.For example,China now has 4.5 million registered voolunteers who have privided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work.That means much labor are saved.Besides,it also take a good example to all the people.More and more people are beginning to do good did or what the can do to help people in need,which will make our society more harmony. As far as am concerns,the benifits of volunteering are great,why not joiin in and do it together?
