小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is a beutiful girl.she name is Lili.She have big eyes and long hiar.She is a good kid who alway help others.And then ,she is so quite who like read ,listen to music and walking.So,we can often see her read at class or walking in school by herself.