高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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Present:There are lot of green trees surrounding my hometown village.Fishes play in the river with much joy.Houses are simple and streets are narrow. Now:High buildings,factories and shops standing everywhere.All kinds of vehicles crossing streets.Industry development environment is getting worse.Timber are getting less,and fishes are more and more less. The most urgent task is deal with pollution.