2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear Ali: I'm so pleasant to hear you will visit my hometown. My hometown called Kaifeng located in the middle north of China, Henan Provence. She is a city with 2000 years history and famous as the capital of Song Empire.Nearby our mother river-- the Yellow rever, in our long history , took part in many accendt and hero in this land, There are many antiant arctichet and betiful sence. Besides, the most important is you will eat lots of delicious food, it's the pride of Chinese food. Like huangjia baozi, liyu peimian, SO, it's a beautiful and funny city, i'm very hope you can visit, trust me, you will love this