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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3094
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。

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                  My Idea Of A University Arts Festival    Life needs art.As a college students,at least in my view that a university arts festival is indispensable.School art festival is a good chance for students to contact more arts as will as expend their knowledge. To be honest,there are various of ways to hold a university arts festival, such as arts lecture、 and Of course , it is meaningful to students and can let them acquire more through that activities.Firstly,students can make use of their spare time to enrich their college life through enjoying the painting and calligraphy exhibition. Besides,  students can not only strength communicating with the others,but also can get a better know about by having arts communications. It is common that different people have different views concerning arts.The last but not least,it is an excellent opportunity for students to feel the charming of arts,which maybe be attracted by that great art cultural. All in all,it is obviously that Arts Festival is essential for every university.

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