作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;有效的运用了一些复杂句。
My Idea Of A University Arts Festival Life needs art.As a college students,at least in my view that a university arts festival is indispensable.School art festival is a good chance for students to contact more arts as will as expend their knowledge. To be honest,there are various of ways to hold a university arts festival,for it is significative to students and it is also a great chance for them to acquire more through arts activities.If school hold a art festival.First of all,students can make use of their spare time to enrich their college life by enjoying the painting and calligraphy exhibition. Besides,not can they express their ideas to strength communicating ability ,but also can get a better know about by having arts communications that after all different people have different opinions concerning arts.Last but not least,it is an excellent opportunity for students to feel the charming of arts through attending art lecture ,which maybe be attracted by that great art cultural. All in all,it is obviously that Arts Festival is essential for every university.
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