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There was a long time during which I felt confused about my life,and I tried so hard to figure out the meaning of living.Then every morning I woke up asking myself several questions again and again.“What’s the meaning of my life?What do I really want?”I was also gloomy at that moment because of those negative feelings,such as I failed to do everything and I was a loser,which was quiet a tough time for me to get through. But fortunately I made it.After a few days of being pessimistic,I suddenly realized that I cannot be stuck in this horrible situation anymore and I have to change not only my opinions but also my attitude toward my life.Maybe I should not focus too much on the meaning of life but the way I live my life. Then I have learned to accept things that I cannot change and let them go,as well as became more aware of the significance of cherishing those people around me.Now I live happily and chase after what I want without any hesitation,and that is the most meaningful in my life.