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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9021
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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There was a long time during which I felt confused about my life,and I tried so hard to figure out the meaning of living.Then every morning I woke up asking myself several questions again and again.“What’s the meaning of my life?What do I really want?”I was also gloomy at that moment because of those negative feelings,such as I failed to do everything and I was a loser,which was quiet a tough time for me to get through. But fortunately I made it.After a few days of being pessimistic,I suddenly realized that I cannot be stuck in this horrible situation anymore and I have to change not only my opinions but also my attitude toward my life.Maybe I should not focus too much on the meaning of life but the way I live my life. Then I have learned to accept things that I cannot change and let them go,as well as became more aware of the significance of cherishing those people around me.Now I live happily and chase after what I want without any hesitation,and that is the most meaningful in my life.

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