托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；若注意文中一些句法错误，文章会更不错；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下。

The essence of the the sports is pursuing to break out the human's limitation,but not becoming the companion in a simple competition.So whether participating sports is worthwhile or not is not depending on winning the games but on the efforts you take to surpass yourselves. So I think highly of the participating the sports itself because it is the source of the value.I still remember one black runner who joined in the Marathon in a Olympic Game several decades ago. I keep him in my mind till now is not because he got a good rank but for the perserverance which was revealed from him.After he finish his running,everyone could not help standing up clapping for his behavior for a span of at least five minutes without intervals though he is the last one arrived at the terminal.