小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is my mother,she is 50 years old ,she has big eyes and a small mourth, and her hear is very long and dark .She is very friendly ,and she likes talk about everybody,she loves me and me too,she aways cooks a kinds of food for me. When I feel sad ,she aways tell many happiness thing to me ,so she is my best friend forever.