丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
My good friend is my mother,she is 50 years old ,she has big eyes and a small mourth, and her hear is very long and dark .She is very friendly ,and she likes talk about everybody,she loves me and me too,she aways cooks a kinds of food for me. When I feel sad ,she aways tell many happiness thing to me ,so she is my best friend forever.