2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过拼写错误比较多；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

As is show in the picture,a date from Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey shows that eduation pays in higher earning and low unemployment.the higher education level you have,the higher pays you will get. For examplem,less than high school dioloma people they unployment rates is 14. 4%,meanwhile,they weekly earns only 451.what account this phenomenon ? Obviously,it is the education level.nowdays is a knomledge scoiety,fortunes is made mainly by brain work,not physcial.people who have higher education level will have more oppituty to employment and more payts. In conclusion ,only we have higer education leveol,can we live better in the word.