2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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There are many interesting places in my hometown that i want to show my foreign friend,xingzheng is my hometown.It is a beautiful places,zhengfeng park is very big and beautiful.there are many green trees,strange stone,cheer birds,and clean river.There are also have a interesting place,it is shizhu mountain,it is very great and beautiful,Ihave climbed many times,every time i climbed it gave me a delibrate feeling,the air is fresh around the mountain,and the road of this mountain is narrow,what'more,when you stand the top of mountain you will feel very realx. this is i want to talk.