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When I was a little boy, I dreamt nothing. Maybe,being a happiness boy is my unequal pursue.When I left home and go to study in a college,400 kilometers away from my hometown Huangshan (Huizhou,her used name which sustained more than 800 hundreds), I started to realize I come from a great place where created a glorious history in the ancient dynasty,a place where created hui merchants,hui culture,hui cuisine and so on.Now her name is Huangshan,a famous tourist city because of Mount Huang.But a sad truth placed in front of the people of Huizhou is that compared with her history this area is lost in the contemporary age.