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When I was a little boy, I dreamt nothing. Maybe,being a happy boy is my unique pursue at that time.When I grow up and left home to go to study in a college,400 kilometers away from my hometown Huangshan (Huizhou,her used name which sustained more than 800 hundreds), I started to realize I come from a great place where created a glorious history in the ancient dynasty,a place where created hui merchants,hui culture,hui cuisine and so on.Now her name is Huangshan,a famous tourist city because of Mount Huang.But a sad truth placed in front of the people of Huizhou is that compared with her history this area is lost in the contemporary age.From the internet I got acquainted with so many people who are so pride of our history and making determination to revive our great history. I was shocked and realized I should also do something to contribute to our hometown,and the thought becomes one of my objectives since then. When I graduated,I conceived my dream and started my job,than I found that the dream is very plump,reality very bone.So I made a decision that go back to campus to have a further study. Now,I am here as a postgraduate at donghua university.My dream of making my own little contribution to my hometown is always there,but I should make myself more excellent to achieve it.To be honest,I am so cherish this opportunity of studying here,so I made a detailed plan before I came here. My expectation of study is also my demands to myself.Firstly,I should study well of my major courses,these are essential demands to myself since it is my major duty as a student.Secondly,I will browse many other books which are correlate to my major,I read these books because I think to be a qualified student of Economics,and it is also a good way to enhance my knowledge accomplishment.Thirdly,in order to accomplish my master thesis smoothy,I need read academic papers in my major area . ln addition,to be a competitive person in the future,I also need equip several practical skills ,such as proficient in Photoshop, Corel VideoStudio,and office.
