2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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No matter who they are and what occupation they engaged in,Everyone want to success.Success could bring people the wealthy,society status and brilliant future.However,how could we take a short cut to success? In my opinion,i deem the way to success could be divided into four parts as follows.In the first place,a strong heart that could resist enormous pressure is necessary,just as the proverb goes,"Failure is the mother of success".Secondly,diligence plays a key role in the way to success.Besides,a good relationship with your friends or partners could make it much easier.They could try their every efforts to help you when you are faced with problem.Last but not least,maybe opportunity also will be an dominant element in your way to success. In a word,“Rome was not built in one day”.We must try our efforts to enrich our knowledge,widen the vision,Finally,all of us will find the rigth way to success.