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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(30): 大学新生

发布时间:2014-08-29 18:09浏览次数:604
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Sun Yue is a fresh senior 1 student. She and her best friend are studying in different senior high schools. She’s worried that they can’t be good friends any more, so she wrote to the editor for advice. Write your advice to Sun Yue as an editor. (字数要求:120字左右)

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hello Sun Yue friendship is all over the world everyone have friendship but what,s the friendship? First Friendship is when you partner have difficult and upset you will useless to help him and talking with him and being more happiest to him second if you and your friends was have a communicating problem you and your friend should keep a believe and don,t have a deep misunderstanding although you and best friend are studying in different senor high school but you don,t worried that A best friendship is never have misunderstanding and as time going by as your friendship were deep Believe me you and your best friend were a deep friendship and a good partner !

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