2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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There is universal existing phenomenon that a variety of products are excessive packaging at present.There is no doubt that exceeded packaging will generate a great deal of unexpected and serious problems.However,what result in the phenomenon?I conclude some justifications as follows. In the first place,not only can delicate packaging bring more benefits to producers,but also it will capture many persons attentions,what is the most significant thing is that it inspires customers' desire purchasing products.And besides,extraordinary packaging can present a status different ordinary persons.In addition,the reason why occuring the excessive packaging is that the related apartment dose not reinforce urging and the related laws and regulations are not improved further. As far as I am concerned,products should be advised packaging but exceeded packaging,which may generate indispensable waste.Moreover,as a customer,we had better develop the custom of rational consumption.