文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear Mary, I'm Liming. I will be sent to Beijing for errands tomorrow and stay there for about a week. Now I am making something needed neat and have not sufficient time to tell you the detail. unfortunately, time is very closely to Yuandan festival. It looks not enough time for me to discuss Yuandan party with you. It is up to you to hold the party during my absence. I wish that you can inform me of your decision on something linked to the party, such as time, address and other prepares needed. Thanks a lot. Your sincerely Liming