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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9039
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇。

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As is shown in the picture,when the father saw the rubbish in the room,and he told his son if he could empty the dustbin here,he could do anything.It reminds me of the importance of doing small things while most people spend much more time in the significant things they think rather than the small things. As it is,doing small things is important in that we can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our minds. To be specific,sorting out the dustbin is a really eye-opener,from which we can save something that can be reused and decrease the pollution.Moreover,moral outlooks and views of life revealed in the small things offer great nourishment and contribute to our life and wisdom.For instance,there is a company want to recruit the staff,they put papers on the floor in order to exam who will pick up the paper,but only one pick up it,so,this man passes the examination. All in all,if you intend to success,doing small things right now.

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