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Mr. Johnson, we received 3000 products on 22 December. However, according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the number of products ought to be 3,500. So far, we have not got other 500 products. As a matter of fact, these products are extremely vital for us to further manufacture. In view of urgent need for our enterprise, please check your product list to ascertain the reason as soon as possible. we are looking forward to your early reply.
