- 分享到:
the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；全文结构较为严谨；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Notice Content: Autumn travelling Who: one grade freshmen Activities: Morning: visit botanic garden and watch the exposition Human and Nature Afternoon: the Summer Palace Assemble time and address: 7 o'clock in the morning, December 27th; the gate of school Attention: 1) carrying lunch meal by yourselves 2) Enter name in Student committee before Thuesday this week 3) You can leave your baggage in the left baggage office According to the schedule, the touring course will include many extremely interesting places.Please be on time.
