文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;句式不够多变,另外需加强句法知识;请注意分段。
in china, there are many extremely beautiful places where a great number of people wish to travel, such as Chengdu, Beijing, Nanjing, Xi'an, and so forth. However, I would recommend the most interesting place-Chengdu-to you among all beautiful places. Compared with other cities, Chengdu has many distinguished places. there are many