2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Guilin,my hometown, is located in the south of China.As far as we all know,Guilin is one of the most beautiful cities of China.It is famous for travel.Every year tens of thousands of people from all around the world visit Guilin.The popularity of Guilin is not only due to the wonderful scenery of Guillin,but also for the reason that Guilin is an utmost interesting place.On one hand,The Li River and The Seven Star Park is very beautiful,people can enjoy themselves freely there.On the other hand,people can pay a visit to Lemandi and Yangsuo,then they will have fun with a lot of crazy activities.What`s more,people in Guilin are friendly and warmhearted.Guilin is also a historical city.People can find many strange phenomenons and mysteries.In a word,you may have an unforgettable experience if you visit Guilin.