2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

As we all known,with the development of technology,the market of mobile phone springs up and it has a higher and higher demand. We have to acknowlege that this phenomenon suggests common people's living standard is raising.Nevertheless,from my point of view,overusing mobile phone is not a terrific thing. For one thing,it is bad for pedestrains' eyesight.They always stare at the small screen all the day no matter where they are.For another, they will lose many chance to see the beauty surround us and make new friends.Also,they will lose their ability of communication face to face. All in all,although the number of the use of mobile phone is creasing,it is important for us to watch out for the bad consequences of overusing it.