作者能较灵活地使用学术词汇,但单词拼写要认真;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;能够使用一些不错的从句。
Living in an age when the adolescents are lack of the necessary guidance supervision,we can never fail to figure out the aact that teenagers are become especially self-conscious.Under this circumstance.the youngsters are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice before rawing teeir conclusions, which is patheetically and undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable. The reasons why I insist on the viewpoint that we should never directly and irrensponsibly come to conclusions only by listening or seeing mainly lie in the following two aspects.To egin withe, it is a invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even for just on second..So are teh theings happening around us. What we see or listen may be just some perspectives we conclude just through seeing or listening are usually one-sided. Drawing conclusions rashly is not objective enough to make our statements persuasive. To sum up.itsi unwise for us toe define any thing as what we assume or imagine at first sight,Only by our serious thinking and accurate analyzing can we come up withe more rational and reasonable concludions.
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