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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Lively portrayed in the picture are two men and a bottle which pours out a half of water in it and remain as a half of water in it.The man on the left looked upset.The man on the right is thinking:It’s so lucky that there are still some water left. There is no denying that this picture aims to tell us that happy or not is decided by your attitude.When faced with difficulties,pessimists always intend to only see the bad side of things so that they often feel upset.However,optimists always see the good side of things,so they rarely be frustrated. As far as I am concerned,it is sensible that keep an optimistic attitude towards life,especially when you are confronted with troubles.Since feeling upset can’t resolve any problems,why not be happy?Moreover,feel happy may even drives you make an effort to deal with your problems.The saying said:the world is his who enjoys it.When you have the whole world in your heart,you won’t fear of any difficulties.
