字数:200满分:100分
作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, these is a hotpot containing various ingredients of multi-cultures, such as Chinese traditional culture, art and celebrities, as well as western culture, thoughts and celebrities of science. We are informed that it is tremendously delicious and nutritious when these “ingredients” combined together. The drawing implies a prevailing trend-the integration of global cultures. The purpose of the cartoonist is to show us that the integration of global cultures brings us great advantage. The integration of cultures not only provides an abundant of experience for individuals, but also promotes the development of diversity culture. On the one hand, in the exchange of cultures, new energy is input into traditional culture. On the other hand, innovation and creativity are involved in the process of culture collision. In my view, instead of being outdated and of little value in a rapidly modernizing world, cultural blending should be encouraged, and is vital in ensuring a community’s future development and prosperity. Only in these ways can we live a better life.