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We always say that believe what you see and what you hear.Actully,our eyes can lie to us the same as our ears. First,when you step into a coffee shop,there is a flower on the table.You can see the colour of the flower and you believe that is real.But we cann't sure about it unless we touch and smell it.This story tell us that is unwise to judge something by seeing it. Then we get to the ears.When we tired,sometimes we can hear something and somebody believe that's ture.Can you believe it?If you can't,then you can't judge something by hearing it. We know we can't trust our eyes and ears but we always forget it.After reading my essay,please remmber that it's unwise to judge by seeing or hearing something.
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