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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40868
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分54.0分
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作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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We always say that believe what you see and what you hear.Actully,our eyes can lie to us the same as our ears. First,when you step into a coffee shop,there is a flower on the table.You can see the colour of the flower and you believe that is real.But we cann't sure about it unless we touch and smell it.This story tell us that is unwise to judge something by seeing it. Then we get to the ears.When we tired,sometimes we can hear something and somebody believe that's ture.Can you believe it?If you can't,then you can't judge something by hearing it. We know we can't trust our eyes and ears but we always forget it.After reading my essay,please remmber that it's unwise to judge by seeing or hearing something.

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