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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
As is symbolically demonstrated in the cartoon, a bottle on the ground, and the drink out of the bottle. A man very delight in that a little wine in the bottle, yet another one appears pessimistic, think of that as it was all over. The purpose of the drawing is to show us the importance of mentality, when it comes to the cultivation of individual characteristics. In the first place, it is no exaggeration to say optimistic can bring our creative power into practice, arouse our enthusiasm for work and help us overcome difficulties. Put it another way, without it, achievements can hardly be made. In the second place, have a positive meaning gives us light. When we are in dark, and encouragement when we are dismayed. It is quality, rather than genius or extraordinary abilities that inspire us to fulfill the arduous task. I can think of no better illustration than Nelson Mandela, the former President of South Africa. He was a man insisting on love and forgiveness and his life perfectly illustrates the importance of ___ in achieving goals and dreams. In conclusion, with the quality of ___. We can finally run ahead to the terminal of happiness and enjoy our life to the uttermost.
