小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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He tries to con me into cheating for him but I refused him directly.Some people have been sent to the local hospital by an overdose of medicine.Gargling with salt is helpful for teeth.What he said hit a sore spot of mine.As a journalist,I should udate on what is happening in people's life.When a robber put a gun to your head,remember not to try to fight with him.What you said doesn't count,what counts is what you have done.You are born to be an exellent writer,Look like you know a lot about me.That is your ego.Think it twice before you make a judement about others.My mother means me to be a successful 'woman.Don't take it granted that your parents 's love is sure.