2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨。

No matter who we are,where we are,or what we do,all of us want to succeed.Success could bring people the money,status,wealth and brilliant future.However,how could we take a short cut to success? In my opinion,I deem the way to succeed could be divided into four parts as follows.In the first place,a strong heart that could resist enormous pressure is necessary,just as the proverb goes,"Failure is the mother of success".Secondly,diligence plays a key role in the way to success.Besides,a good relationship with your friends or partners could make it much easier.They could try their efforts to help you when you are in trouble.Last but not least,maybe opportunity will also be an dominant element in your way to success. In a word,“Rome was not built in one day”.We must try our efforts to enrich our knowledge,widen the vision,Finally,all of us will find the rigth way to success.