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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;文章用词灵活多样,但请注意增用学术词汇,单词拼写还要加强。

用户练习作文:

At the fist sight of this topic, an ancient proverb of China flashed my mind that 'Thinking carefully before you act'. Of course, i believe the proverb above without any doubt because we all clear that impulse is devil.You may pay a heavy price on the following statement sometimes if you always make decisions like this.The snap judgements are perhaps right or reasonable,however,the chances of that happening are pretty slim.Whatever you do, bear in mind that look before you leap. Once I bought an expensive mobile phone without any hesitation which beyond my purchasing power even the money was borrowed from my friends and I have no income as a student.I have to pinch pennies and more important this saveing act is not enough.At last I felt very guilty for asking for my parents support and my parents are farmers whose money is hard to earn. I regret it later and determined not impulse anyl onger.Like the old saying:A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit, I'm really no hasty anymore. One day you will pay the price if you persist your old ways of making speedy decisions.Therefore,bear in mind ,don't do the following statements.

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