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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第39篇:玩游戏是否能教你生活

发布时间:2013-08-16 16:51浏览次数:1398
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Playing games teaches us about life.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


玩游戏是否能教你生活。给出具体的原因并举例。

字数要求:300字以内。

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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

Some sociologists argue that even the adults should always play games with each other to improve their living skills.I cannot agree with it more because games are not belonging to the babies and teenagers solely in my mind.In other words,playing games teaches us about life. First of all,playing games can teach us how to cooperate with our companies and collegues. A lot of electronic games allow more than two players to form a coalition to participate into the games,and during the time,players can have the chance to coordinate everyone's actions and develop the custom about taking care of others. In addition,we can learn to hide our emotions and the way to cater for others.For example, when we play chess,we should be sedated and never show your intentions to your rival.

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