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题目要求：
People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.题目分析：
列出两、三个除了钱之外的工作的理由：兴趣(比如有些歌星)； 理想(比如有些医生、律师)； 成就感(比如教师)； 还有些人上班工作只不过是为了打发时间。过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。
It is undeniable that the main reason of almost people working is money.Otherwise there are still amounts of purposes why people work so hard. First of all,actors and actress are so lucky because they are working for interests.But not everyone is so lucky like them who can do what they are fond of.In addition,some people are working for the sense of success.For example,the athletes enjoy the victory when they win the game.What's more,to be a doctor or a lawyer or a teacher is sort of contributing to our society.In the other words,it is making dreams come true and completing the self-value.At last not least,some one works meaningless just for spending time without any meaningful reason and so forth. From my point of view,I consider it wonderful to work at what you like and also can contribute to our society.
